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Underwater

  • Writer: amrita rath
    amrita rath
  • Oct 17, 2020
  • 1 min read

Updated: Oct 24, 2020


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Insentient, she lay on the beach,

couldn’t feel the water, unable to reach.

The day was balmy & sun was high,

she wiped her face with a heavy sigh.

Slowly she tried to wake & sit,

after a minute she rose to her feet.

Stepped into the water, didn‘t hesitate,

deeper she went as if an inveterate.

Suddenly she stopped & dived in,

underwater she went chanting within.

Cursed the sea with her glance,

for gulping all her dearest ones.


 
 
 

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6 Comments


arunav.rath
Oct 26, 2020

Superb!

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trisha101907
Oct 17, 2020

This is beautiful. Subtle hints, and beautiful nuances. And yes. The ending is one of my favourites, it depends on individual perception.

Stellar as usual, Amrita Rath. Keep 'em coming❤️

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adwiti2008
Oct 17, 2020

you are the best POET your poems contain magic and your THEMES and the name of the poem

YOUR POEMS ARE JUST AMAZING THE BEST THING IS U DON'T WRITE LONG POEMS

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misra648
Oct 17, 2020

Good theme appreciable work,god bless you.Continue writing.

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misra648
Oct 17, 2020

1.Invertebrate is not the word ,it may be invertebrate. Further rode to her feet contradicts invertebrate state.


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