Underwater
- amrita rath
- Oct 17, 2020
- 1 min read
Updated: Oct 24, 2020

Insentient, she lay on the beach,
couldn’t feel the water, unable to reach.
The day was balmy & sun was high,
she wiped her face with a heavy sigh.
Slowly she tried to wake & sit,
after a minute she rose to her feet.
Stepped into the water, didn‘t hesitate,
deeper she went as if an inveterate.
Suddenly she stopped & dived in,
underwater she went chanting within.
Cursed the sea with her glance,
for gulping all her dearest ones.
Superb!
This is beautiful. Subtle hints, and beautiful nuances. And yes. The ending is one of my favourites, it depends on individual perception.
Stellar as usual, Amrita Rath. Keep 'em coming❤️
you are the best POET your poems contain magic and your THEMES and the name of the poem
YOUR POEMS ARE JUST AMAZING THE BEST THING IS U DON'T WRITE LONG POEMS
Good theme appreciable work,god bless you.Continue writing.
1.Invertebrate is not the word ,it may be invertebrate. Further rode to her feet contradicts invertebrate state.