Heaven
- amrita rath
- Oct 15, 2020
- 1 min read

All I remember was being sick,
the strangely beautiful place made me freak.
Every visible thing was covered in,
unicorns roamed around in the sight.
It felt like living a dream,
& the road made of clouds felt like cream.
Suddenly I began to suffocate,
& found myself somewhere I couldn’t locate.
Hundreds of people were roaming around,
I spotted my parents, kneeling on the ground.
Ran towards them, shouting aloud,
none could hear me, among the crowd.
I saw a tear leaving my mother‘s eye,
instead of consoling her, everyone began to cry.
My hands shivered as I tried to hold her,
on seeing myself in the coffin, now everything looked blurr.
Be optimistic
I love all your dreams, its beautiful 😍
Very touchy....keep writing....God bless
A vivid imaginary scene of the last exit from this eternal world so nicely penned,yet to believe for a teenager to visualise such a scenerio.Megha has the potential to build castle in air, keep the practice up and God bless