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A trip with strangers

  • Writer: amrita rath
    amrita rath
  • Oct 31, 2020
  • 1 min read

Updated: Nov 15, 2020


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The street was dark &

the clock read 3,

still worked at the desk

there were none except me.


Walking back home I

talked to myself with scoff,

thinking about work &

taking some days off.


Excited & tensed, I thought

moving to & fro,

with strangers on a trip

how would I go ?


Luggages packed, I sat

listening to a faint chime,

nervous all the way, still

reached the spot in time.


The bus was filled but

with none I knew,

seeing everyone in groups

my anxiety grew.


Few moments later,

taking pictures in phone,

these faces around me

no longer looked unknown.


Shouting around, sharing food

& the window seat fight,

my loneliness was gone

& it all felt right.


Sitting around the fire

we danced & sang,

we trekked & hiked

now I called them my gang.


The fun was over &

the heart was in pain,

we said goodbye to each other

knowing we would never meet again.









 
 
 

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5 Comments


dwiti.mishra
Oct 31, 2020

Its a fantastic journey where you get break a lot of barriers. This write up had hastened my need for a outdoor and fun filled trip. Keep it up

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trisha101907
Oct 31, 2020

Ooh this reminded me of our Ramchandi trip a long time back. I liked how you could make a seamless conclusion come through even in a short word limit. Beautiful!!

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drmishrapc
Oct 31, 2020

Loneliness is a state of mind. There is no limit of imagination. Well narrated.

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harapriya0348
Oct 31, 2020

Nice thought described in pen and paper.. each line has got marvelous feeling. Thank you dear God 🙏 bless you.

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arunav.rath
Oct 31, 2020

Excellent..I am sure we will enjoy outdoors very soon

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