Fear
- amrita rath
- Dec 18, 2020
- 1 min read
Updated: Dec 19, 2020
Sitting near the window
staring at the sky
seeping through my mind
those voices asked why?
Lighted edifices in the front
& a pitch dark room behind,
even the wind changed it’s way
away from this mysterious mind.
Maybe Im dreaming
my eyes are sore
it‘s so suffocating
can’t fight anymore
can’t fight anymore.
Mind with so many scars
which bled every night
slowly I extended my hand
hoping to grab some light.
Empty hands again, you’re nothing
those voices I could hear
the room lit up as I realised
I decide my fate not fear
I decide my fate not fear.
Maybe I’m dreaming
my eyes are sore
its so suffocating
can’t fight anymore.
NOTE- it’s a song
Its a passing phase. In reality we live to enjoy life and not to worry about the outcomes
Superb.Keep it up.
The description is good the words
are appropriate but always dream is dream. It comes automatically and disappears immediatly so it has no importance in real life. so henceforth no fear.
The poet has described a terrific dream,so depressing and disappointing,but dream is a dream and hardly can happen,neverthe less, one should try to get over such negative feelings even in dream and think positive.